Thursday, January 20, 2011

The half drawn curtain moved...

The half drawn curtain moved, life stood still. A blank mind, yet it was only that exact moment in time that I could not think, then a sudden cool breeze flowed upon my face, so gently and so fresh. The trees swaying, the leaves making soothing sounds, the sound of a rushing river, that suddenly drops and meets with rocks below, it is a beautiful sight from way up high to way down low. The moment never so perfect. The scent of blooming fresh flowers, the light sweetness that fills the air like hot tea with a hint of sweet delicious honey. It flows along with the refreshing winds, that rush over the healthy soft grass. Am I in a dream? Am I thinking to hard? Or is this reality? These questions are wanting to be answered, but who am I to ruin this moment. The sight of pure natural beauty surrounds me, our mother nature. She has truly shown me the true beauty of nature, our earth. I can almost taste the fresh greens, the healthy sweet plants. A moment when time doesn't matter, stress is gone, worriess do not exists. Life at a pause. Just what I need. A sudden change.

2 comments:

  1. I really like how detailed this. Great use of imagery.

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  2. really well written. it's like I can see every detail in my head. remember the difference between to and too tho. that's the only mistake that I found. otherwise, you did a good job

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